The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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number
hours
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average that four different countries spent in relaxing activities during vacations in Greece Change preposition
on
8/2019
.
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in 8/2019
Overall
, Chinese
and Americans
spent more hours
reading books and going to the beach
, Turkish
and Correct word choice
while Turkish
Brazilians
like to go to the beach
. All the countries used
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spent
less
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fewer
hours
to
visiting new places, being Change preposition
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Americans
and Turkish
who used
more Verb problem
spent
hours
in
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on
this
activity.
Chinese
tourist
spent 8 Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
hours
reading books, almost doubled
the Replace the word
double
Americans
that used 5 Correct quantifier usage
number of Americans
hours
, Brazilians
and Turkish
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hours
. Brazilians
stayed in
the Change preposition
on
beach
6
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for 6
hours
just 1 hour more than Turkish
who spent 5 Correct article usage
the Turkish
hours
and doubled the Chinese
that went to the beach
for 3 hours
. Americans
spent 4 hours
relaxing at the beach
.
Americans
and Turkish
spent the same hours
visiting places with 3 hours
each, tripled Chinese
with 1 hour and doubled Brazilians
with only 2 hours
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