> The maps below show the centre of a small town calles Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. > Write at least 150 words

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The map illustrates the plan which will take place in Islip through the installation of lots of

facilities

Overall

it is clear that

many residential

facilities

are planned to

install

Wrong verb form

be installed

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in the city centre. Meanwhile, new roads will be built around the city. Focusing on the

facilities

although

the school and the southern housing remain, a new housing will built next to the park.

This

park will be halved

due to

a new

road

. The shops located above the main

road

will be replaced by new

facilities

which involve a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park

as well as

new housing. Turning to the construction of roads, the most significant change is a dual carriageway.

This

road

will surround the city and connect the main spots of the map. In the western connection, a short pass will be added to connect to a new housing.

Additionally

, the main

road

will be converted to a new

road

, which allows only people to walk through.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words facilities, road with synonyms.

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