you received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job. write a letter to this friend. in your letter. say why he/she would not enjoy going to college. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Man
I am writing to say, I hope
this
letter can help you with this
difficult decision. As I know you, you are not the person who will sit and cram some kind of subject.
Finding a job is better for you, because of it
your behaviour which is not giving Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
you to study by spending time in the same place for 4 or 5 years. You are more like to take Change preposition
apply
actions more
than Fix the agreement mistake
action
cramming
in college.
If I were you, I Replace the word
cram
will
rather choose Wrong verb form
would
finding
a job than Change the verb form
to find
studying
in a college. The reason Replace the word
study
of
Change preposition
for
this
kind of decision is, if you try to get qualification
of Add an article
the qualification
a qualification
Correct article usage
a raicer
raicer
it will Correct your spelling
raiser
as
easy as shooting fish in a barrel. After seeing your driving skills, the coach of races Add a missing verb
be as
which
I know just Correct pronoun usage
apply
falls
in love with your driving skills.He told me Wrong verb form
fell
what
you were a diamond in the rough.
Hopefully, you will find my suggestion accurate for you. I look forward to hearing from you within a week. See you soon.
Best wishes.
John SmithCorrect word choice
that
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coherence cohesion
Introduce more paragraphs for each point to avoid running multiple ideas together.
coherence cohesion
Work on the flow of ideas; ensure each paragraph builds on the previous one more smoothly.
task achievement
The letter has a friendly and personal tone, suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and friendly.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite