The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart depicts the figure for illiteracy for both
men
and women
in six different parts of the world last
year. It is evident that the majority of women
are illiterate while
men
's percentage
are comparatively lower.
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
To begin
with, as is shown, the highest illiteracy rate was in South Asia with 55 per cent
for females and 35 per cent
for males; also
, the figure for women
was higher than men
's in the Arab States with a gap of around 32 per cent
. On the contrary
, the figure for the lowest illiteracy rate was in the developed nations with only 1 to 2 per cent
for both genders. It is interesting to note that the rate difference in Latin American and Caribbean regions was very close with about 2 per cent
in both sexes.
Overall
, we can tell from the bar graph that education for women
is not so
valued as for Correct word choice
as
men
in six areas of the globe.Submitted by wendy190427 on
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