The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart depicts the figure for illiteracy for both
men
and
women
in six different parts of the world
last
year. It is evident that the majority of
women
are illiterate
while
men
's
percentage
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percentages
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are comparatively lower.   

To begin
with, as is shown, the highest illiteracy rate was in South Asia with 55 per
cent
for females and 35 per
cent
for males;
also
, the figure for
women
was higher than
men
's in the Arab States with a gap of around 32 per
cent
On the contrary
, the figure for the lowest illiteracy rate was in the developed nations with only 1 to 2 per
cent
for both genders. It is interesting to note that the rate difference in Latin American and Caribbean regions was very close with about 2 per
cent
in both sexes.  

Overall
, we can tell from the bar graph that education for
women
is not
so
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valued as for
men
in six areas of the globe.
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