topic - In many countries more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
There are several nations
show
that most of their citizens consume huge Correct pronoun usage
that show
amount
of imported Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
food
from abroad rather than locally produced food
. This
is happening because of the quality of the food
. While
there are some measures that can be implemented on buying local
grown Change the adjective
locally
food
.
On the one hand, people
prefer buying international food
because of it's
high-end quality. It is obvious for individuals to take Replace the word
its
well processed
Add a hyphen
well-processed
food
to avoid health issues like; diarrhoea ,food
poisoning and so on. Apart from that, international food
suppliers not only maintain their hygiene but also
warp food
nicely to keep them safe from dust, flies
and to look fresh Correct word choice
and flies
as well as
clean. Moreover
, there are a number of varieties food
which are highly rich Change preposition
of food
with
nutrients. Maybe these are very easy to cook. So, Change preposition
in
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
food
helps people
on
their diet and gives different types of taste from daily boring meals. Change preposition
with
For instance
, In Vietnam, the shop owners collect food
from different countries as
, apples ,Change preposition
apply
grapes
from America and melon from Japan. These Correct word choice
and grapes
food
Fix the agreement mistake
foods
have
displayed Verb problem
are
by
very well Change preposition
apply
protectedly
. Correct your spelling
protected
Additionally
, people
spend a significant amount money
on rarely available foreign Change preposition
of money
food
for meeting
up their appeal.
Change preposition
to meet
However
, it is possible to regain popularity among local food
. Firstly
, farmers should reduce applying eronmous
Correct your spelling
enormous
amount
of pesticides in agricultural fields .Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
As a result
, there will be a reduction of health problems as some of
Change preposition
apply
over used
fertilizers lead to cancer . Correct your spelling
overused
Government
should impose strict regulations regarding packaging, Correct article usage
The government
hygienic
maintenance. Another attempt could be marketing and arranging campaigns to encourage Correct word choice
and hygienic
about
their product quality.Change preposition
apply
Also
that will lead to Add a comma
Also,
spend
money on Change the verb form
spending
local
grown products Change the adjective
locally
as well as
will
improve Verb problem
apply
national
economy .Add an article
the national
Consequently
, the air pollution will decrease because of less transportation called- Food
mile
.
In conclusion, Capitalize word
Mile
having
imported Unnecessary verb
apply
food
has already reached on top position by providing qualityful
Correct your spelling
quality
product
. So to mitigate Fix the agreement mistake
products
this
comsuming
local Correct your spelling
consuming
people
and government should work together continuously. There is no alternative without working on this
fact.Submitted by tasnimsanzida97 on
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