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topic - In many countries more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

#topic #countries #people #food
There are several nations
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that show
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 that most of their citizens consume huge
amount
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amounts
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 of imported
food
 from abroad rather than locally produced
food
.
This
 is happening because of the quality of the
food
.
While
 there are some measures that can be implemented on buying
local
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locally
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 grown
food
. On the one hand,
people
 prefer buying international
food
 because of
it's
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its
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 high-end quality. It is obvious for individuals to take
well processed
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well-processed
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food
 to avoid health issues like; diarrhoea ,
food
 poisoning and so on. Apart from that, international
food
 suppliers not only maintain their hygiene but
also
 warp
food
 nicely to keep them safe from dust,
flies
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and flies
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 and to look fresh
as well as
 clean.
Moreover
, there are a number of varieties
food
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of food
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 which are highly rich
with
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in
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 nutrients. Maybe these are very easy to cook. So,
these kind
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this kind
these kinds
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 of
food
 helps
people
on
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with
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 their diet and gives different types of taste from daily boring meals.
For instance
, In Vietnam, the shop owners collect
food
 from different countries
as
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apply
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, apples ,
grapes
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and grapes
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 from America and melon from Japan. These
food
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foods
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have
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are
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 displayed
by
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apply
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very well
protectedly
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protected
.
Additionally
,
people
 spend a significant amount
money
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of money
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 on rarely available foreign
food
for meeting
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to meet
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 up their appeal.
However
, it is possible to regain popularity among local
food
.
Firstly
, farmers should reduce applying
eronmous
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enormous
amount
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amounts
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 of pesticides in agricultural fields .
As a result
, there will be a reduction of health problems as some
of
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apply
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over used
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overused
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 fertilizers lead to cancer .
Government
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The government
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 should impose strict regulations regarding packaging,
hygienic
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and hygienic
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 maintenance. Another attempt could be marketing and arranging campaigns to encourage
about
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apply
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their product quality.
Also
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Also,
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 that will lead to
spend
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spending
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 money on
local
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locally
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 grown products
as well as
will
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apply
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improve
national
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the national
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 economy .
Consequently
, the air pollution will decrease because of less transportation called-
Food
mile
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. In conclusion,
having
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imported
food
 has already reached on top position by providing
qualityful
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quality
product
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products
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. So to mitigate
this
comsuming
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consuming
 local
people
 and government should work together continuously. There is no alternative without working on
this
 fact.
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