The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares some of
living
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problems of City citizens in major Britain cities in 2008.
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, it can be seen that health services had the highest
number
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compared to the others, except Glasgow and
London
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. Meanwhile, air pollution was observed to be the lowest
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. The
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of health services in Belfast was the biggest, accounting for around 58%,
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that of Cardiff ranked
second,
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nearly 57%.
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, the figure for Newcastle, Birmingham, Manchester, and
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, exceeded 50%. Regarding education and training, the proportion of Belfast, Birmingham, Cardiff, Glasgow, and
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was the same at roughly 53%.
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, the percentage of both Newcastle and Manchester was lower than 50%. In terms of air pollution, the
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of Manchester ranked
first,
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around 15%,
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of
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London
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and Cardiff
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nearly 13% and 11% respectively.
However
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, the figure for Newcastle, Belfast, Birmingham, and Glasgow was no more than 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, london with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant issue
  • high percentage
  • real estate market
  • traffic congestion
  • transportation issues
  • urban areas
  • health services
  • dissatisfaction
  • healthcare facilities
  • crime rates
  • safety
  • law enforcement
  • education and employment issues
  • job market
  • educational systems
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