The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares some of
living
problems of City citizens in major Britain cities in 2008. Add an article
the living
Overall
, it can be seen that health services had the highest number
compared to the others, except Glasgow and London
. Meanwhile, air pollution was observed to be the lowest number
.
The number
of health services in Belfast was the biggest, accounting for around 58%, whereas
that of Cardiff ranked second,
nearly 57%. Moreover
, the figure for Newcastle, Birmingham, Manchester, and London
, exceeded 50%. Regarding education and training, the proportion of Belfast, Birmingham, Cardiff, Glasgow, and London
was the same at roughly 53%. On the contrary
, the percentage of both Newcastle and Manchester was lower than 50%.
In terms of air pollution, the number
of Manchester ranked first,
around 15%, while
that
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apply
of
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London
and Cardiff was
nearly 13% and 11% respectively. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
However
, the figure for Newcastle, Belfast, Birmingham, and Glasgow was no more than 10%.Submitted by pandin21 on
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