The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares some of
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problems of City citizens in major Britain cities in 2008.
Overall
, it can be seen that health services had the highest
number
compared to the others, except Glasgow and
London
. Meanwhile, air pollution was observed to be the lowest
number
. The
number
of health services in Belfast was the biggest, accounting for around 58%,
whereas
that of Cardiff ranked
second,
nearly 57%.
Moreover
, the figure for Newcastle, Birmingham, Manchester, and
London
, exceeded 50%. Regarding education and training, the proportion of Belfast, Birmingham, Cardiff, Glasgow, and
London
was the same at roughly 53%.
On the contrary
, the percentage of both Newcastle and Manchester was lower than 50%. In terms of air pollution, the
number
of Manchester ranked
first,
around 15%,
while
that
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London
and Cardiff
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nearly 13% and 11% respectively.
However
, the figure for Newcastle, Belfast, Birmingham, and Glasgow was no more than 10%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant issue
  • high percentage
  • real estate market
  • traffic congestion
  • transportation issues
  • urban areas
  • health services
  • dissatisfaction
  • healthcare facilities
  • crime rates
  • safety
  • law enforcement
  • education and employment issues
  • job market
  • educational systems
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