The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for a different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
The line graph presents information about the
number
of people who participated in various activities at one social centre event in Melbourne, Australia from 2000 to 2020.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the number
of participants
in table tennis,
and a downward trend in amateur dramatics. Remove the comma
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However
, the number
of participants
in the film club experienced fluctuation throughout the period.
In 2000, the number
of participants
in the film club started at about 63, the number
showed some fluctuation between 2005 and 2010, and in 2015 the number
of participants
rose to about 65. Similarly
, the number
of participants
in martial arts started at about 36 in 2000, there was a steady drop in 2005 to about 31 participants
and the number
rose to 38 participants
in 2010, between 2015 and 2020 the number
fluctuated reaching a point of 35 participants
.
In 2000, the table tennis numbers started at about 15 participants
, the number
experienced a steady rise throughout the years, reaching the highest number
of about 52 participants
in 2020. While
, the number
of amateur dramatics had a downward experience, starting at about 25 participants
, the number
rose in 2005 to about 26 participants
, in the next 15 years the number
dropped dramatically, reaching its lowest point at about 5 participants
. In addition
, musical performances started in 2005 with no participants
, in the following year, the number
rose steadily to reach a point of about 15 participants
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