The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the changes in the global
food
price Use synonyms
index
and the average Use synonyms
oil
price from 2000 to 2011.
It is evident that, despite experiencing several notable fluctuations, both Use synonyms
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oil
costs saw a significant Use synonyms
overall
increase over the eleven-year period. The trends for both commodities are very similar, suggesting a strong correlation.
In 2000, the Linking Words
food
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index
and the average cost of Use synonyms
oil
were relatively low, with the former standing at approximately 90 Use synonyms
points
and the latter around 30 Use synonyms
dollars
per barrel. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, by mid-2008, both indices had risen considerably, with the Linking Words
food
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index
reaching around 220 Use synonyms
points
and the average Use synonyms
oil
cost climbing to 130 Use synonyms
dollars
per barrel. Use synonyms
However
, after a marked decline in 2009—where the Linking Words
food
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index
dropped by over 80 Use synonyms
points
to 140 Use synonyms
points
, and Use synonyms
oil
costs fell sharply by around 90 Use synonyms
dollars
to 40 Use synonyms
dollars
per barrel—both indices surged once again from 2009 to 2011.
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Although
they reached their highest Linking Words
points
in different years—with Use synonyms
oil
peaking at roughly 130 Use synonyms
dollars
in mid-2008 and Use synonyms
food
reaching its maximum at almost 240 Use synonyms
points
in 2011—both commodities exhibited a remarkably similar trend over the period, with a correlation rate of 93.6%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, index, oil, points, dollars with synonyms.
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