The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map given provides information about changes in Brindell and areas around it from the year 1800 to 2000.
Overall
, most of the structures remain the same throughout the years, and most transformations occur in the smaller sections of the town. During 1800, farmlands for crops were located in the Northwestern part, which remained unchanged over the years. Close to it, over the northeastern side, is the woodland. As far as it is concerned, its area reduced through the years, taking up only a small corner in 2000, making space for Bun Hill Park. Brindell, the main town, is in the southwestern part. It slightly got wider in size;
however
, in 2000, Brindeli increased significantly. The area on the left of
this
town was once made for animals during 1800;
nevertheless
,
this
area was transformed, and shared by Bun Hill, a village for workers, and industrial businesses.
This
piece of land was expanded in 2000, and
as a result
, the village and businesses
also
expanded. Separating the woodland and the farm is river Stour, which remained similar through time.
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