The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced

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The diagram illustrates the different stages of how biofuel which is

also

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called

ethanol

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is produced.

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, there are many stages involved in

ethanol

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production. Starting from the first stage which involves planting

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trees,

harvesting

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and harvesting

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the material which

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passes through different

process

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processes

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ethanol

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mae

are

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used by different

mode

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modes

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of transportation which

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released

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releases

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carbondioxide

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carbon dioxide

back

ito

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into

the atmosphere.

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with, plants and trees are grown by energy absorbed through sunlight and carbon dioxide. When the trees are grown, they are harvested using

a tractors

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tractors

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, the harvested material

are

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then

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sent to

a pre-processing equipment

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pre-processing equipment

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which

crushed

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the material into tiny particles to form cellulose.

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, the cellulose ar

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sent into the lab for processing,

sugars

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and sugars

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organic

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matter are added with microbes which is the final stage of the process.

Ethanol

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then

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produced which

are

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used by cars, trucks, and

airplane

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airplanes

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for transportation.

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transportation mood causes the release of

carbodioxide

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carbon dioxide

back into the atmosphere, which

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rebirth the

continous

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continuous

process.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

biomass
ethanol
fermentation
microorganisms
yeast
carbon dioxide
distillation
purification
dehydration
raw materials
storage
distribution
renewable energy
greenhouse gas emissions
sustainable fuel
concentration
impurities
alcohol content
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The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced

With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

write a letter about complaining of loud noise from your neighbour explain the situation what you suffered suggest some actions

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