The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how
electricity
is produced by using one type of coal. Overall
, there are 5 main processes for coal to produce electricity
. These processes are retrieval from the mine, passing through a gasifier, cooling down, cleaning and being processed in a gas
power plant
.
Firstly
, coal is retrieved from a coal mine, then
, coal goes through a crusher to split into smaller pieces. The smaller coal pieces are loaded into a storage bin and are collected by truck and delivered to a processing plant
. Upon delivery, coal will be put through a gasifier which emits heat and gas
. Cooling the coal,
is the next process which releases waste heat.
After that, the byproduct of cooled gasified coal is cleaned. Cleaned coal byproduct is transferred to a Remove the comma
apply
gas
power plant
. In the power plant
, coal gas
is changed from gas
to electricity
and it also
produces waste heat which needs to get rid of. After electricity
is produced, it is finally
distributed to electric companies and industrial buildings.Submitted by estillorericamae on
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