You are planning for a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: tell him/her why you want to take a vacation describe your plan invite him/her to go with you.

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Dear Jenna, I hope you’ve been well. If you haven’t, I might have the perfect solution! You know I have been busy for these past few weeks. Well,
that is
because I was planning a vacation to South Korea and I would love
if
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it if
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you could come
along with
me! Ever since spring started, I wanted to relax and take some time off from everything related to work. So, I thought that a trip to one of the most beautiful countries in the world would help with that. I didn’t figure out the whole plan yet, because you know how spontaneous I am, but I do have a bit of an outline ready. I want to visit all the places where the most popular dramas were filmed.
This
has been always on my bucket list.
Moreover
, I’d
also
like to try all the Korean street food. We haven’t been able to see each other too often,
however
, I think
this
is the best opportunity for us to spend some time together like we did when we were younger! Call me as soon as you read
this
! With love, Anne.
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Consider providing a bit more detail about your preliminary plans for the vacation to make the letter even more engaging.
coherence cohesion
Adding transitional phrases between paragraphs can further enhance the flow of ideas.
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Your letter has a warm, inviting tone that is highly appropriate for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are well-executed, providing a personal touch to the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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