You are planning for a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: tell him/her why you want to take a vacation describe your plan invite him/her to go with you.

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Dear Jenna, I hope you’ve been well. If you haven’t, I might have the perfect solution! You know I have been busy for these past few weeks. Well,

that is

because I was planning a vacation to South Korea and I would love

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it if

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you could come

along with

me! Ever since spring started, I wanted to relax and take some time off from everything related to work. So, I thought that a trip to one of the most beautiful countries in the world would help with that. I didn’t figure out the whole plan yet, because you know how spontaneous I am, but I do have a bit of an outline ready. I want to visit all the places where the most popular dramas were filmed.

This

has been always on my bucket list.

Moreover

, I’d

also

like to try all the Korean street food. We haven’t been able to see each other too often,

however

, I think

this

is the best opportunity for us to spend some time together like we did when we were younger! Call me as soon as you read

this

! With love, Anne.

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Consider providing a bit more detail about your preliminary plans for the vacation to make the letter even more engaging.

coherence cohesion

Adding transitional phrases between paragraphs can further enhance the flow of ideas.

task achievement

Your letter has a warm, inviting tone that is highly appropriate for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are well-executed, providing a personal touch to the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

189 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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