The line graph illustrates the amount of visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries over a period of eighteen years between 1996 and 2014.
The table illustrates how much money a secondhand bookstore spent in
January
and December
2018.
Overall
, while
the rent spending had the most significant share of the store expenses
in both months, the maintenance expenses
had only a tiny share. Also
, the total spending increased significantly in December
as compared to January
.
While
wages and benefits spending decreased slightly by almost 40$ in December
, the rent expenses
rose at the same time by nearly 1500 $. Equipment expenses
were reduced by one-tenth by the end of the recorded year after it was 53 $ at the beginning. Although
the utility bills dropped significantly by nearly a half in December
2018, professional fees rose dramatically to almost three times what they were in January
.
Miscellaneous expenditures increased slightly from what they were in the first month of the year from 444 $ to nearly 600 $. Marketing and maintenance fees rose dramatically from 263 $ and 10 $ in January
to 355 $ and 32 $, respectively. Also
, the total monthly expenses
increased by nearly one-half by the end of 2018.Submitted by
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