Some people think that parents should be punished if their children commit crimes because they are responsible for their children's actions To what extent do you agree or disagree

There are differing opinions regarding whether

parents

should take consequences if their

children

engage in criminal activities as they have to be accountable. From my perspective,

this

idea is profoundly true in terms of

parents

’ parenting and

parents

moral hazard. Transitioning into the first reason, parenting is the

way

parents

teach

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their

children

,

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as if remember that home is

children

first school,

hence

the behaviour that occurs caused by the parent's parenting,

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if the parent teach their

children

good attitude,

then

will not engage in criminal activities unless their external factors

influences

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them.

Secondly

, the

way

parents

interpret the

moral

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and their

belief

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it would

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how they

behaved

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,

for

instance

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if the

parents

follow

deviant

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sect that

taught

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them harm attitude

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other people,

parents

of course influence

this

mindset and behaviour

to

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their

children

owing to

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hope their

children

have the same the

way

their belief,

thus

children

will see, learn and imitate their parent attitude, eventually their curiosity bring them to take action in crimes without fully comprehend that their action will harm people. In conclusion, I firmly believe that the government should treat the same

way

in terms of punishment to both

children

and

parents

,

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when

children

take

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criminal action. I wholeheartedly suggest that people should

take

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an eye

to

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parents

in terms of parenting by providing them

seminars

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, training,

counselling

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and counselling

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in order to raise

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children

.