The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
diagram illustrates a process
of how a sheep
is cloned
There are 2 different steps of extracting genes for same gender
Add a hyphen
same-gender
sheep
before that one step which
genes are amalgamated and put into Correct pronoun usage
apply
uterus
of a foster mother.
The Correct article usage
the uterus
process
of extracting genes from female Sheep
A begins with taking body cell
from it. Fix the agreement mistake
cells
Finally
its DNA is extracted which is from taken body Add a comma
Finally,
cell
and the DNA will be waiting for steps
of Correct article usage
the steps
Sheep
B to be done.
At the first stage
in the process
of taking the nucleus from Sheep
B , its Egs cell
is taken and then
, finally
, the Nucleus is removed.After all of these steps,everything is done to start a
Correct article usage
the
process
of cloning.
Firstly
, the DNA from Sheep
A fused with egg
Correct article usage
the egg
cell
from Sheep
B. Secondly
, the fused cell
develops into an embryo which is placed in the utreus
of Correct your spelling
uterus
Sheep
C. Finally
, the Lamb is born as a clone of Sheep
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