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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate information regarding
sales
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 of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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 and bananas in the years 1999 and 2004 in the UK,
Switzerland
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,
Denmark
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, Belgium, and
Sweden
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.
Overall
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, in the
coffee
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 department, the UK earned the majority amount in 2004.
However
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,
Sweden
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 earned the lowest amount.
Moreover
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, in the Banana sector,
Switzerland
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 earned the majority amount in 2004.
While
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 Demark earned the lowest.
Firstly
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,
Denmark
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 sold 1.5
million
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 euros, which was the highest
sales
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 happened in 1999.
Nevertheless
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, the lowest
sales
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 happened in
Sweden
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 with 0.8
million
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.
In addition
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,
Switzerland
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 earned 3
million
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 in 1999.
However
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, within five years, its
sales
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 doubled. The
sales
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 for
coffee
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 in
Denmark
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, Belgium, and
Sweden
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 were 1.8, 1, and 0.8
million
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 respectively. In comparison with 2004 people's consumption of
coffee
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 was reduced in two countries, which are
Sweden
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 and
Denmark
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.
Secondly
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, In banana
sales
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,
Switzerland
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 earned high in both periods. In comparison with 1999
Switzerland
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, the UK, and Belgium countries
sales
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 increased within five years. In 2004 bananas sold 0.9
million
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, which was the lowest
sales
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 among all five counties.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, switzerland, denmark, sweden, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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