The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart categorizes the proportions of
tourists
by their nationalities- Use synonyms
Asians
, Europeans, Americans, and others- visiting Australia, Use synonyms
whereas
the table provides details on their duration of stay, accommodation preferences, and type of activities performed by visitors originating from all those four backgrounds.
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Overall
, European and American Linking Words
tourists
accounted for more than half of the visitors touring Use synonyms
to
Australia, who preferred spending at least half a month on the resort. Most globetrotters spent their holidays in average accommodations, except for the Change preposition
apply
Asians
. Notably, the Use synonyms
tourists
performed four leisure activities which included sightseeing, swimming, sunbathing, and surfing.
Use synonyms
According to
the pie chart, Linking Words
it is clear that
the number of holidaymakers coming from Europe stood the highest ( 37%), followed by the Americans (35%); Linking Words
whereas
the remaining just below 30% comprised Linking Words
Asians
and other ethnicities.
Regarding the excursionist's whereabouts and avocations, even though the Use synonyms
Asians
spent exactly a week on the resort in a five-star hotel, they preferred sightseeing during their vacation. Use synonyms
Similarly
, Linking Words
tourists
from other nations lodged in caravans or camps, doing surfing. Use synonyms
In contrast
, during the 14-day stay in a four-star hotel, Americans participated in the same recreational activities as the Linking Words
Asians
, Use synonyms
whereas
the Europeans Linking Words
sunsoaked
and swam during their 16 days holidays in caravans and camps.Correct your spelling
sun-soaked
sun soaked
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