The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart categorizes the proportions of
tourists
by their nationalities-
Asians
, Europeans, Americans, and others- visiting Australia,
whereas
the table provides details on their duration of stay, accommodation preferences, and type of activities performed by visitors originating from all those four backgrounds.
Overall
, European and American
tourists
accounted for more than half of the visitors touring
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Australia, who preferred spending at least half a month on the resort. Most globetrotters spent their holidays in average accommodations, except for the
Asians
. Notably, the
tourists
performed four leisure activities which included sightseeing, swimming, sunbathing, and surfing.
According to
the pie chart,
it is clear that
the number of holidaymakers coming from Europe stood the highest ( 37%), followed by the Americans (35%);
whereas
the remaining just below 30% comprised
Asians
and other ethnicities. Regarding the excursionist's whereabouts and avocations, even though the
Asians
spent exactly a week on the resort in a five-star hotel, they preferred sightseeing during their vacation.
Similarly
,
tourists
from other nations lodged in caravans or camps, doing surfing.
In contrast
, during the 14-day stay in a four-star hotel, Americans participated in the same recreational activities as the
Asians
,
whereas
the Europeans
sunsoaked
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sun-soaked
sun soaked
and swam during their 16 days holidays in caravans and camps.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, asians with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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