The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs display the
ways
of two different countries to have access
to the news
.
Overall
, the main access
to the news
in both countries is online and by TV. Print, radio and not specified ways
are the least very far in percentages respect
to the main Change preposition
with respect
access
.
In Canada, the primary way to access
the news
is by TV with 40% and, secondly
is online with 36%. Other alternatives to having the news
are less common like print, radio and not in specific with 14%, 7% and 3% respectively.
In Australia
nearly half of the Add a comma
Australia,
access
to the news
is online, while
in
TV is second place with just 37%. Change preposition
apply
Other
Fix the agreement mistake
Another way
ways
to having
Wrong verb form
have
access
to the news
is
with newspapers, Change the verb form
are
However
the radio one of the main sources of information is not really used in Australia reaching only 2 Add a comma
However,
percent
like not specific Change the spelling
per cent
ways
with 2% as well.Submitted by daniruspi on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ways, access, news with synonyms.
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