The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs display the
ways
of two different countries to have
access
to the
news
.
Overall
, the main
access
to the
news
in both countries is online and by TV. Print, radio and not specified
ways
are the least very far in percentages
respect
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to the main
access
. In Canada, the primary way to
access
the
news
is by TV with 40% and,
secondly
is online with 36%. Other alternatives to having the
news
are less common like print, radio and not in specific with 14%, 7% and 3% respectively. In
Australia
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Australia,
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nearly half of the
access
to the
news
is online,
while
in
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apply
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TV is second place with just 37%.
Other
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Another way
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ways
to
having
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have
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access
to the
news
is
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are
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with newspapers,
However
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However,
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the radio one of the main sources of information is not really used in Australia reaching only 2
percent
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per cent
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like not specific
ways
with 2% as well.
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