The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graphs display the

ways

of two different countries to have

access

to the

news

Overall

, the main

access

to the

news

in both countries is online and by TV. Print, radio and not specified

ways

are the least very far in percentages

respect

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to the main

access

. In Canada, the primary way to

access

the

news

is by TV with 40% and,

secondly

is online with 36%. Other alternatives to having the

news

are less common like print, radio and not in specific with 14%, 7% and 3% respectively. In

Australia

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Australia,

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nearly half of the

access

to the

news

is online,

while

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apply

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TV is second place with just 37%.

Other

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Another way

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ways

having

Wrong verb form

have

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access

to the

news

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are

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with newspapers,

However

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However,

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the radio one of the main sources of information is not really used in Australia reaching only 2

percent

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per cent

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like not specific

ways

with 2% as well.

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