The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates did their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the proportion of reasons for doing
MBA
among students and the ratio of the needed aspects which employers value.
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Overall
, it is clear that
the primary motive for graduating MBA is that it provides better job
opportunities. Moreover
, we can see that job
managers' most valuable qualities are personality and previous experience with the same proportion.
To begin
, the survey results show that many people graduate MBA for the reason of better opportunities of
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job
with 65%, whereas
the ability to help others consists
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In addition
, from the results, we can notice that only 12% and 20% of the whole pie belong to respectively the personal development and the ability to do the job
better reasons.
Additionally
, it is noticeable that job
managers value mostly aspects such
as personality and previous knowledge which illustrated the same results with 25%. Also
, the second valuable qualities that employers need are previous connections and appearance respectively with 20%. At
the end, the least sought for being qualifications at only 10%.Change the preposition
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