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Task 1: (Table) The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.

Task 1: (Table) The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
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The graph given illustrates data on
life
expectancy
 at
birth
 in countries with different income levels. The graph relates 2000 to 2004.
Overall
, the
number
 of
cases
 in 2004 in
life
expectancy
 at
birth
 was more than the
number
 of
cases
 in 2002.
According to
 the graph, it is noticeable that there is a development.
To begin
, first of all, it can be clearly seen that
life
expectancy
 at
birth
 in countries with different income levels. The initial one to consider is that In 2004, the figures for
cases
 a significant increase of approximately 78.7 in
life
expectancy
 at
birth
.
In addition
, there was a sharp fall to 1.7 in average
birth
 per woman.
On the other hand
, by 2002, there was a significant rise to 78.0 in
life
expectancy
 at
birth
.
Therefore
, the
number
 of
cases
 reduced slightly about to 2.2. Regarding the given data, it is remarkable that there is a leap. The figures for
cases
 in 2002 in average
birth
 per woman was more than the
number
 of
cases
 in 2004. In reference to represented figures, it is significant that there is an achievement.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words life, expectancy, birth, number, cases with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Population growth rate
  • Average birth per woman
  • Life expectancy at birth
  • Income levels
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Correlations
  • Improvements
  • Declines
  • Statistics
  • Comparisons
  • High-income countries
  • Low-income countries
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