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The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table and pie graph shown provide information about
tourists
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 at an Australian holiday resort.
Overall
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, if we take the 4 elements in combination,
it is clear that
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 Asian
tourists
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 take up the biggest proportion in the pie chart. Regarding the table, European
tourists
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 stay for the longest, with an average of 16
days
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.
This
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 resort has the most visits from visitors from Asia, with 37%. They are usually here for 7
days
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 at a 5-star hotel and often go sightseeing. Asian
tourists
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' 37% is closely followed by European
tourists
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 with just a 2% gap, equivalent to 35% of the total. They
also
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 stay for the longest,
according to
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 the table, with 16
days
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 mostly spent camping or in a caravan. Most
tourists
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 from
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 region enjoy swimming or sunbathing. In terms of American
tourists
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, who make up nearly one-fifth of the chart, they generally linger for 14
days
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 in a 4-star hotel and would normally spend their time sightseeing.
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 leaves one-tenth of the chart belonging to
tourists
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 from other regions commonly having a 10-day holiday with the accommodation of camping or caravan. They typically go surfing, which is a different type of hobby compared to the other groups
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, days with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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