The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and pie graph shown provide information about
tourists
at an Australian holiday resort.
Overall
, if we take the 4 elements in combination,
it is clear that
Asian
tourists
take up the biggest proportion in the pie chart. Regarding the table, European
tourists
stay for the longest, with an average of 16
days
.
This
resort has the most visits from visitors from Asia, with 37%. They are usually here for 7
days
at a 5-star hotel and often go sightseeing. Asian
tourists
' 37% is closely followed by European
tourists
with just a 2% gap, equivalent to 35% of the total. They
also
stay for the longest,
according to
the table, with 16
days
mostly spent camping or in a caravan. Most
tourists
from
this
region enjoy swimming or sunbathing. In terms of American
tourists
, who make up nearly one-fifth of the chart, they generally linger for 14
days
in a 4-star hotel and would normally spend their time sightseeing.
This
leaves one-tenth of the chart belonging to
tourists
from other regions commonly having a 10-day holiday with the accommodation of camping or caravan. They typically go surfing, which is a different type of hobby compared to the other groups
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