The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent

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The process chart illustrates how electrical energy is generated from a particular type of coal from mining to processing it for the final use.

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, a unique type of coal is mined and transported to a plant, where it is gasified and waste is disposed of.

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it is cooled and used in a

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powerplant to produce electricity for domestic and industrial consumers.

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with, the coal is mined from a large mine, which is in the form of large chunks.

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it is crushed into a fine powder before it is moved to the place where it gets gasified in a gasifier. All solid debris is eliminated here and the

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formed is cooled.

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this

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transferred to a

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power plant where it is burnt to produce electricity and heat. The heat, which is produced , is waste. The energy created is transmitted afterwards to the consumers- ie. the households and the industries.

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The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent

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