The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie diagrams

depicts

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the expenditure of gas and/or

electricty

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electricity

and the greenhouse gas

emissions

resulting from

this

usage in an average Australian domestic consumer.

Overall

, the major share of the energy consumption is from heating the rooms,which is next to the

water

heating.

On the other hand

,

emissions

that

results

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from

this

usage, which are environmentally deleterious,

demonstrates

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that

water

heating is held responsible for the most

emissions

and surprisingly,other appliances

emits

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next to

water

heating.

To begin

with,

The

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household warmers

consumes

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nearly half of the total energy expenditure of an average Australian house, where it is 42%. In the next place,

water

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the water

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heater is used more, which is about one-third of the whole, ie 32%. The cooling system takes up the lowest of the energy consumption, which

constitute

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only 2%. The lighting uses double of

this

, which is about 4%. Other appliances contribute 15% and

the

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refrigeration is responsible for around half of

this

, which is 7%. Contrastingly, the other appliances

emits

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approximately a quarter of the whole share of

emissions

, which comes

28

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%, but

water

heating tops the contribution to

this

by a proportion of 32%.

The refrigeration

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Refrigeration

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and

the

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heating

emits

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emit

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almost equal

per cent

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percentages

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of

the

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greenhouse gas

emission

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emissions

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, 14% and 15% respectively.