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The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with the date they opened, kilometers of route, and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with the date they opened, kilometers of route, and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information on underground railway systems in six significant cities, detailing the year each system was inaugurated, the total length of their routes in
kilometres
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, and the annual number of
passengers
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 in millions. London's underground system, being the oldest, opened in 1863 and boasts the longest
route
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 at 394
kilometres
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. Despite its extensive network, it only ranks third in terms of
passenger
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 numbers, with 775
million
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 users per year.
On the other hand
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, Tokyo, which opened in 1927, has the highest number of
passengers
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 annually at 1928
million
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, despite having a shorter
route
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 length of 155
kilometres
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. Paris
,
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 opened in 1900, has a
route
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 length of 199
kilometres
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 and serves 1191
million
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passengers
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 annually, making it second in
passenger
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 usage. Meanwhile, newer systems like Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles have significantly smaller
route
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 lengths and
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 numbers.
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, Kyoto, with just 11
kilometres
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 of
route
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, caters to 45
million
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passengers
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 per year,
while
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 Los Angeles, with 28
kilometres
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, serves 50
million
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 annually.
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, older and more extensive underground systems tend to have higher
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 numbers,
although
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 exceptions like Tokyo highlight that efficiency and population density can
also
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 significantly influence ridership.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kilometres, passengers, route, passenger, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railways
  • kilometers of route
  • passenger numbers
  • annually
  • compare and contrast
  • mega-cities
  • public transportation infrastructure
  • extensive network
  • rapid transit
  • capacity
  • commuter volume
  • inauguration date
  • modernization
  • vintage
  • urban development
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