The map below shows the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The program of geothermal power
plant
will Fix the agreement mistake
plants
shows
how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Change the verb form
show
Firstly
,cold Linking Words
water
will be pumped down into
the injection well, and Use synonyms
then
it will go through the geothermal zone to reach the production well.Cold Linking Words
water
has changed into hot Use synonyms
water
already. Use synonyms
The next step is
to pump up the hot Linking Words
water
into the condenser which becomes steam in Use synonyms
this
place.Linking Words
steam
can provide power Capitalize word
Steam
to
Change preposition
for
turbine
to work.Add an article
the turbine
a turbine
Finally
, Linking Words
generator
is powered by Add an article
the generator
a generator
turbine
and produces electricity.
Add an article
the turbine
a turbine
The
Correct article usage
Water
water
Use synonyms
replace
Change the verb form
replaces
the
energy which cannot Correct article usage
apply
renewable
to provide electricity for production and living.It is a good way to save energy and protect Add a missing verb
be renewable
environment
.Add an article
the environment
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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