The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members in 2017. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members of this health club. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Health club use in Miami and Florida in 2017
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The bar
chart
illustrates the usage of health
club
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clubs
Miami
and Florida in 2017 which is divided by Change preposition
in Miami
genders
. The pie Fix the agreement mistake
gender
chart
shows male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
registered Fix the agreement mistake
females
to
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for
health
club
membership
separated by age
. When considered together there is no correlation between the two sets of data.
There was a fluctuation occur
in 2017 Verb problem
apply
Miami
and Florida Change preposition
in Miami
health
club
use, but men always be the majority for
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of
the
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apply
health
club
user
. The highest peak of the Fix the agreement mistake
users
health
club
usability for men happened on
June 2017, approximately there were 850 Change preposition
in
health
club
users in this
month. For female
, the most Fix the agreement mistake
females
health
club
user
happened in August and September which were about 720 monthly users.
For male Fix the agreement mistake
users
membership
, the majority of member
were in Fix the agreement mistake
members
21
-45 Correct article usage
the 21
age
groups
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group
for
donating Change preposition
apply
of
55% of the total male Change preposition
apply
membership
program. On the other hand
, the smallest age
group
that were
joined the male Unnecessary verb
apply
membership
were Correct article usage
the others
others
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other
age
group
that Fix the agreement mistake
groups
were consist
of outside Change the verb form
consisted
21
-45 and Correct article usage
the 21
65+
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the 65+
age
group
gave about 20% from
the total male Change preposition
of
membership
. This
situation found
in Add a missing verb
was found
female
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the female
membership
program, 21-45 age
groups donate
about 50% and Wrong verb form
donated
others
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other
age
group
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groups
donate
19%% Wrong verb form
donated
from
the total female Change preposition
of
membership
In conclusion, the bar chart
and pie chart
did not correlate with each other because there were differences in both sets of data.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, health, club, membership, age, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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