The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart compares the amount of
books
read by males and females
at Burnaby Public Library over a period of 3 years.
Overall
, it is clear that
the average sum
of books
read by men
increased dramatically throughout the given period, and reached its peak at the end
. Whereas
, the amount of women who read books
fluctuated.
To begin
, in 2011, the total sum
of read
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reading
books
by men
was around just 3000, whereas
females
read approximately more than 2000 books
. Moreover
, we can notice that the sum
of read books
by both men
and females
increased respectively from about 3000 to 4000 and from roughly 5000 to just above 8000, from 2011 to 2012.
In addition
, it is noticeable that the amount
of articles read by Change the quantifier
number
females
rose steadily by 2000 in 2013, reaching its peak, while
there was a significant increase in the total number of readings by the opposite gender from just 4000 to 10000 at the same time; however
, after the sum
of books
read by women part declined moderately to around 7000 in 2014, and men
saw a dramatic rise to 14000, getting its peak.Submitted by talgattan4ez on
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