The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph presents data for many
members
of several activities at a social centre located in Melbourne, Australia from 2000 to 2020. Activities are film club, martial arts,
amateur
dramatics
, and musical
performances
.
Overall
, participants had more interest in the film club throughout the period of time. By the year 2020,
amateur
dramatics
were less preferred among
members
with less than 10 numbers.
Initially
,
amateur
dramaric had approximately 25
members
and table tennis about 18, but in the year 2010, they were equivalent to each other. Interestingly, table tennis outraced
amateur
dramatics
and exceeded martial arts after 2015. In 2020 the number of participants in table tennis reached over 50 number which makes it the second largest activity after the film club. Martial arts fluctuated in 20 years with an average of 35 number.
While
there were not any musical
performances
at the social centre in 2000, in 2005 musical
performances
were constructed and rose rapidly to 10
members
in 5 years. Eventually, musical
performances
superseded
amateur
dramatics
with nearly 14 participants.
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