The table below shows the changes in participation levels in various sports in the USA between 2010 and 2014 for people aged 18 and 34.

The table below shows the changes in participation levels in various sports in the USA between 2010 and 2014 for people aged 18 and 34.
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The table compares the amount of 18 to 34-year-old participants in eight different sports in the United States of America over the 4-year gap.
Overall
,
It is clear that
running was by far the most popular in the
year
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2010 and 2014.
In contrast
, baseball was at the bottom of the ranking list. In 2012, 15
million
citizens of the USA participated in running, and weightlifting was the second most favourite sport, with 12
million
bodybuilders. Hiking and swimming each received just under 13
million
players,
while
Yoga and Basketball shared fifth place.
Furthermore
, Baseball and Softball each had just a little less than 4
million
players. 2014 saw a decline between 0.2 and 2.5
million
for each type of sport, with the exception of Hiking, Running and Yoga, which saw an improvement to 14, 18 and 12
million
, respectively. By far, Baseball still remained at the bottom of the list, losing about half of its participants.
Whereas
, swimming, which experienced a huge loss of 2.5
million
of
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sportsmen
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