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The pie charts below show how general household costs were broken down in a certain city in both 2017 and 2018.

The pie charts below show how general household costs were broken down in a certain city in both 2017 and 2018.
#show #household #costs #city
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The pie charts show how general
household
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costs
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 were broken down in a certain city in
both
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 2017 and 2018. In
both
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 2017 and 2018,
household
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costs
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 of rent or house purchasing were the most spent, of all
household
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costs
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, at 32% and 25 % respectively.
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, the
household
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 cost spent on entertainment is the least of all
household
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 expenditures, being 10% and 15% respectively. Looking at the graphs in more detail, in 2017, people spent 18% of their
household
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 budgets on
both
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 grocery
costs
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 and
household
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 bills.
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, they spent 22 % on schooling.
Whereas
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, in 2018, families spent considerably more on grocery
costs
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, 24 % and they
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 spent less on
both
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household
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 bills and schooling, just 18%.
Finally
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,
household
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costs
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 on groceries and entertainment in 2018, are around 5 % more than in 2017.Compared to
this
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,
household
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costs
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 of schooling and rent or house purchasing in 2017 are around 5% less than that of 2018.
In addition
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,
household
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costs
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 of
household
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 bills stayed the same in
both
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 2017 and 2018.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 92%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, costs, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • distribution
  • household costs
  • proportion
  • category
  • notable
  • increase
  • decrease
  • consistent
  • stable
  • socioeconomic factors
  • inflation
  • household income
  • spending patterns
  • shifts
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