The pie charts below show how general household costs were broken down in a certain city in both 2017 and 2018.
The pie charts show how general
household
costs
were broken down in a certain city in both
2017 and 2018. In both
2017 and 2018, household
costs
of rent or house purchasing were the most spent, of all household
costs
, at 32% and 25 % respectively. However
, the household
cost spent on entertainment is the least of all household
expenditures, being 10% and 15% respectively.
Looking at the graphs in more detail, in 2017, people spent 18% of their household
budgets on both
grocery costs
and household
bills. Additionally
, they spent 22 % on schooling. Whereas
, in 2018, families spent considerably more on grocery costs
, 24 % and they also
spent less on both
household
bills and schooling, just 18%.
Finally
, household
costs
on groceries and entertainment in 2018, are around 5 % more than in 2017.Compared to this
, household
costs
of schooling and rent or house purchasing in 2017 are around 5% less than that of 2018. In addition
, household
costs
of household
bills stayed the same in both
2017 and 2018.Submitted by aimy.emi1097 on
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