The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented maps illustrate changes that will happen for a college at 2 various times( present and 2020).

Overall

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, it is important that the college

area

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will be developed and the number of all facilities will increase;

in contrast

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, the vegetation district will be destroyed.

According to

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the graphs, Road and bus stops will be the same as in

prior

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the prior

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time;

however

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, gardens and footpaths will be destroyed and these regions will connect to not only the main

place

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but

also

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the car park, which will be the same

place

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as past, but the sector will be improved. The pictures show the score of

classroom

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the classroom

a classroom

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will climb to 5

also

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, 4 classes will be on the right of

place

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and one of them will be on the left between the library and lunch

area

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Furthermore

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, the entrance will altered to near the road;

additionally

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, the Toilet and Library will move to in front of the new position.

In addition

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, the Luch

area

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will be the same

place

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, but the reception will move to the centre and will be smaller than the previous;

additionally

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, we will be able to see a new shop upper than the lunch

area

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally, also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, place with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

197 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

architecture
renovation
infrastructure
facade
landscaping
expansion
amenities
accessibility
pedestrian
vehicular traffic
demolition
construction
recreational areas
commons
atrium
courtyard
upgrade
sustainability
commute
ingress
egress
blueprint
survey
layout
zoning
modernization
conservation
integration
footprint

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