The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.
The provided pie charts indicate how many juveniles
in ages
18 to 25 Change preposition
aged
year
old Fix the agreement mistake
years
use
to watch Replace the word
used
TV
in Canada in two various
years.
A glance at the graph reveals that the highest percentage of watching Correct word choice
apply
TV
was for Conventional TV
in 2009.However
,youngsters did not prefer to watch Conventional TV
in 2019.
In 2009,precisely %34 of people
tended to watch Conventional TV
in Canada (which was the highest percentage of consuming TV
over the period),just ahead of the number of watching Flat-screen TV
at %27 in 2019.Moreover
,just under a quarter of people
who were between 18 to 25 years old prefered
to use a Laptop at %20 in 2009,compared to the number of young Correct your spelling
preferred
people
in ages
18 to 25 years old at %12 in 2019.
Change preposition
aged
In contrast
,only a tiny fraction of people
were into watch
Conventional Wrong verb form
watching
TV
at %4 in 2019.(Which was the least number of using television over the whole year).In addition
,using mobile phones for watching TV
in 2009 was significantly less popular than watching TV
with cellphones
in 2019 at %15 and %26,respectively.Correct your spelling
cell phones
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