The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and 

amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 

1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagrams represent changes in the number of
households
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owning electrical tools and how much
time
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is allocated for doing the house chores in one country over the period of almost one age, from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, as years went by, the percentage of
households
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owning all the mentioned appliances, washing machines,
refrigerators
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, and hoovers, increased over
time
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, especially,
refrigerators
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.
Although
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fridge was not, at all, owned in 1920, they became as competent as vacuum cleaners in the
last
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20 years, all the
households
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owned both
refrigerators
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and
refrigerators
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.
However
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, the
time
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duration spent on housework per week decreased at the same
time
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from 50 to 10 hours. In 1920,
while
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none of the
households
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had
refrigerators
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, 40 and 30 per cent of the
households
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owned washing machines and vacuum cleaners, respectively. In 1960, the percentage of the ownership of washing machines, and vacuum cleaners accounted for the same percentage, 70%, and the ownership of
refrigerators
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increased to 90% of the
households
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.
Furthermore
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, in 1920,
whereas
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50 hours were spent on housework in a week per household, it declined noticeably by 2019 as the ownership of electrical household items increased over
time
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, time, refrigerators with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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