The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph depicts the
number
of jobs
in four tourism industrial sectors in the UK over a period of 20 years, starting from 1989. These working fields are - restaurants, hotels, sport and leisure, travel and tours.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the graph that restaurant jobs
were the highest whereas
, travel and tours witnessed the lowest number
of jobs
over the years. However
, sport and leisure experienced a fluctuating trend.
To begin
with, the number
of restaurant jobs
followed an upward trend and reached its peak in 2004 with exactly 1,600. Only in 1994, the jobs
of
hotels surpassed Change preposition
in
the
restaurants which Correct article usage
apply
was
accounted for 1,400 Unnecessary verb
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while
, the
similar Correct article usage
a
number
of positions went for restaurants in 1999.
From 1999 to 2009, the jobs
regarding sports and leisure ranged between just over 1000 and below 800 numbers of positions. It is interesting to note that travel and tours was
the lowest Verb problem
had
number
which was 400 in 2009.Submitted by mahamudzisan on
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