The diagrams below show the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The provided diagram illustrates the
process
of extracting sugar
from sugar
cane.
Overall
, This
7-step process
begins with growing and harvesting sugar
cane and ends with drying the substance in a cold environment. The process
requires heavy machinery, such
as an evaporator and a centrifuge.
The process
starts by growing the plant for approximately 12 to 18 months which is then
collected manually. After that, the sugar
cane is crushed until all juice is extracted from the plant. Because the juice needs to be purified, it is poured through a limestone filter.
At step 5, while
the filtered juice is evaporating from the added heat, it transforms into syrup. Since the syrup contains sugar
crystals which need to be separated from the liquid, it is put in a centrifuge. The last
step of sugar
manufacturing is to dry and cool down the finished product which can be later stored in large metal containors
.Correct your spelling
containers
container
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