The diagrams below show the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The provided diagram illustrates the
process
of extracting Use synonyms
sugar
from Use synonyms
sugar
cane.
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Overall
, Linking Words
This
7-step Linking Words
process
begins with growing and harvesting Use synonyms
sugar
cane and ends with drying the substance in a cold environment. The Use synonyms
process
requires heavy machinery, Use synonyms
such
as an evaporator and a centrifuge.
The Linking Words
process
starts by growing the plant for approximately 12 to 18 months which is Use synonyms
then
collected manually. After that, the Linking Words
sugar
cane is crushed until all juice is extracted from the plant. Because the juice needs to be purified, it is poured through a limestone filter.
At step 5, Use synonyms
while
the filtered juice is evaporating from the added heat, it transforms into syrup. Since the syrup contains Linking Words
sugar
crystals which need to be separated from the liquid, it is put in a centrifuge. The Use synonyms
last
step of Linking Words
sugar
manufacturing is to dry and cool down the finished product which can be later stored in large metal Use synonyms
containors
.Correct your spelling
containers
container
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, sugar with synonyms.
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