The diagrams below show the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The provided diagram illustrates the
process
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of extracting
sugar
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from
sugar
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cane.
Overall
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,
This
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7-step
process
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begins with growing and harvesting
sugar
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cane and ends with drying the substance in a cold environment. The
process
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requires heavy machinery,
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as an evaporator and a centrifuge. The
process
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starts by growing the plant for approximately 12 to 18 months which is
then
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collected manually. After that, the
sugar
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cane is crushed until all juice is extracted from the plant. Because the juice needs to be purified, it is poured through a limestone filter. At step 5,
while
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the filtered juice is evaporating from the added heat, it transforms into syrup. Since the syrup contains
sugar
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crystals which need to be separated from the liquid, it is put in a centrifuge. The
last
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step of
sugar
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manufacturing is to dry and cool down the finished product which can be later stored in large metal
containors
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containers
container
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultivation
  • harvesting
  • mechanically
  • juice extraction
  • purifying
  • impurities
  • evaporation
  • concentration
  • crystallization
  • centrifuges
  • distribution
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