The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph depicts the
number
of visitors travelling in
Caribbean Change preposition
to
island
over a period of 7 years, starting from 2010. The data is measured in Fix the agreement mistake
islands
millions
.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly from the chart that the number
of travellers who stayed on island
experienced a stabilized trend Add an article
the island
whereas
, visitors on cruise ships showed an upward trend. However
, total number
of visitors increased gradually over the years.
To begin
with, tourists staying on cruise ships were the lowest number
in 2010 which was
accounted for below 0.5 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
while
,
the Remove the comma
apply
number
reached its peak in 2017 with exact
2 Correct article usage
an exact
millions
. From 2013 to 2015, the Change to singular
million
number
of travellers on island
remained the same with 1.5 Add an article
the island
millions
.
But the total Change to singular
million
number
was 1 million which was the highest in 2010 as well as
there was a dramatic increase of 3.5 millions
with some stability up to the year Change to singular
million
of
2017.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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