You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart depicts the scores achieved by different teams listed as A, B and
C
over the years marked in
between 2002 and 2005
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, Team
B scored the highest with Team
A Correct your spelling
up next
upnext
, leaving Correct your spelling
up next
Team
C
scoring least
, maintaining a consistent pattern
Upon closer examination, it is observed that Correct article usage
the least
Team
B consistently scored the highest in all four years starting with 82 points
in 2002 which gradually drop downed
to 43 Wrong verb form
dropped
points
in 2004, the declining trend ended with a score of 55 points
in 2005. On the other
hand
Add a comma
hand,
Team
A and C
began with 5 points
and 10 points
in 2002. The scores later on gradually rose to 15 points
in 2003 for Team
C
and overall
Team
A high at 35 points
. However
, this
gradual rise ended with a steep decline in 2004, where both Team
A and C
scored only 8 and 5 points
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words c, team, points with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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