You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart depicts the scores achieved by different teams listed as A, B and
C
over the years marked
in
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apply
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between 2002 and 2005
Overall
,
Team
B scored the highest with
Team
A
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up next
upnext
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up next
, leaving
Team
C
scoring
least
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the least
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, maintaining a consistent pattern Upon closer examination, it is observed that
Team
B consistently scored the highest in all four years starting with 82
points
in 2002 which gradually
drop downed
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to 43
points
in 2004, the declining trend ended with a score of 55
points
in 2005.
On the other
hand
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Team
A and
C
began with 5
points
and 10
points
in 2002. The scores later on gradually rose to 15
points
in 2003 for
Team
C
and
overall
Team
A high at 35
points
.
However
,
this
gradual rise ended with a steep decline in 2004, where both
Team
A and
C
scored only 8 and 5
points
respectively
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words c, team, points with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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