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The table below gives information about students studying in six departments in an Australian university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about students studying in six departments in an Australian university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table displays data on undergraduates who
study
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 in six departments in an
Australian
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 college in the year 2011. The six departments include
Humanities
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, Education, Science, Physics, IT, and Engineering.
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, more
Australian
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 female
students
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 chose to
study
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Humanities
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 than any other department,
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 with the ones whose first language is not English and who were born outside Australia, who chose to
study
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Humanities
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 the least. The IT is the most popular department for
students
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 who
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 not speak English as their native language. As can be seen from the table, just over 70% of females decided to
study
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 in the
Humanities
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 department, but IT was the least popular choice for
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 group, at 17%. Just nearly half of
students
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 whose first language is not
Australian
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 studied at the IT and Science departments, at 49% and 45% respectively.
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 to female
students
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, just over 10% of
students
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 who did not speak
Australian
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 as their mother tongue chose to
study
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Humanities
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. Looking at the table in more detail, the number of
students
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 who were not born in Australia studying IT and Physics was the same, at 56%. The second most popular subject chosen by
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 group was Engineering, at 48%.
Humanities
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 and Education were among the least favourite subjects chosen by
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 group, at 20% and 23% respectively.
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