The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The two graphs depict the current layout of an office building and a proposed development of the same place.
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, it can be immediately observed that the
grass
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has vanished,
while
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some functional areas are added in order to enhance the working environment and facilitate convenience of workers. Looking at the diagram in detail, two pieces of original
grass
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are demolished.
Grass
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which is located in the west of the office, makes way for an outdoor activity area;
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the eastern
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is converted to a meeting area and a place for drinking coffee. Shifting to the middle of the office building, the kitchen and the canteen have taken the place of two offices which used to be sited in the southern area. The size of the four offices is augmented as big as the remained stock room.
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, the Wash Room is
also
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deleted. The entrance with the reception function is relocated from the margin to the middle of the offices.
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