The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the distribution of tourists rate which
visits
a Caribean Island over a Correct subject-verb agreement
visit
period
of seven years from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the figures for visitors
staying on cruise ships , visitors
staying on the island and the total showed an upward trend. Notably, at the end
of the period
, the total number of visitors
soared while
visitors
staying on cruise ships became the highest number.
At the beginning of the period
, visitors
staying on cruise ships stood at around 0.25 million
visitors
and had a slight fluctuation to 0.5 million
visitors
in 2013. From this
point onwards, the number of these visitors
increased significantly by 1,5 million
of visitors
in 2017.
In contrast
, visitors
staying on the island started at exactly 0,75 million
visitors
and remained stable in the following year. Thereafter
, it experienced a slight growth to 1.5 million
visitors
in 2013 and it remained unchanged until 2015 before declining to about 1.25 million
visitors
. At the end
of the period
, this
went up to 1.5 million
visitors
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