The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paritcular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the distribution of tourists rate which
visits
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visit
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a Caribean Island over a
period
of seven years from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the figures for
visitors
staying on cruise ships ,
visitors
staying on the island and the total showed an upward trend. Notably,
at the end
of the
period
, the total number of
visitors
soared
while
visitors
staying on cruise ships became the highest number. At the beginning of the
period
,
visitors
staying on cruise ships stood at around 0.25
million
visitors
and had a slight fluctuation to 0.5
million
visitors
in 2013. From
this
point onwards, the number of these
visitors
increased significantly by 1,5
million
of
visitors
in 2017.
In contrast
,
visitors
staying on the island started at exactly 0,75
million
visitors
and remained stable in the following year.
Thereafter
, it experienced a slight growth to 1.5
million
visitors
in 2013 and it remained unchanged until 2015 before declining to about 1.25
million
visitors
.
At the end
of the
period
,
this
went up to 1.5
million
visitors
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • upward trend
  • steady increase
  • peak
  • stabilization
  • notable change
  • market saturation
  • seasonal variations
  • tourism infrastructure
  • external factors
  • global economic conditions
  • persistent popularity
  • demand patterns
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