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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart compares the total amount of wasted production by three various manufacturers from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the number of
waste
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 from
company
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 A and
company
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B
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 steadily declined throughout the given period,
whereas
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corporation
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C
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 saw a moderate increase, which reached its peak
at the end
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 of
this
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 period.
To begin
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, we can notice that
corporation
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 A was the primary of
waste
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 production with around 12
tonnes
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, whilst firms
B
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 and
C
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 manufactured just approximately 8 and 4
tonnes
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 of
waste
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, respectively. After, in 2005 and 2010,
corporation
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 A saw a slight decrease to about 11
tonnes
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,
whereas
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 companies
C
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 and
B
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 experienced a steady rise to above just 10 and 6
tonnes
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 in 2005 and the amount of
waste
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 by
company
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C
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 continued to increase to roughly 7
tonnes
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, but the
corporation
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B
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 fell back to approximately 7
tonnes
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 in 2010. In 2015, there was a slight fall in the sum of produced
waste
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 by
company
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 A to around 8
tonnes
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, meanwhile, the total amount of
waste
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 products decreased dramatically in firm
B
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. In the end,
company
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C
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 saw a moderate increase to just above 9
tonnes
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, which
also
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 reached its peak in 2015.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, b, corporation, c, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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