The graph below gives information about the technology that households in one US city used for watching television 2004 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided line graph depicts household technology for watching TV in a city in the USA between the years 2004 and 2014.

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, it is clearly seen

internet

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and broadcast

usage

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increased

whereas

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satellite and

cable

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usage

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decreased in a decade.

Firstly

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internet

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usage

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for watching television was close to zero in 2004 and hit a peak of almost 200,000 by 2014.

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the number of individuals using broadcast technology was above 80,000, it gradually dropped to approximately 0 throughout the process. Satellite technology was around 80,000, as

were

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was

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cable

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usage

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However

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, the number of people using satellite went up steadily to 120,000.

On the other hand

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cable

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usage

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ascended at first and

then

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suddenly descended beneath 80,000. In conclusion, people had no

internet

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habits

initially

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, their preferences changed over time. The data shows a clear trend towards rising

internet

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usage

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for watching TV,

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the

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apply

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traditional methods like broadcast and

cable

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have seen a decline.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, usage, cable with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

156 words

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