The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following diagram illustrates the protocol used to manufacture
bricks
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for the building industry for construction work.
Firstly
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,
Terrain
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a Terrain
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made up of
clay
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is dug by
digger
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a digger
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and is
then
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transported to a roller and a metal grid to filter any impurities like rocks and minerals that may be present in the
clay
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. The segregated
clay
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is
then
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mixed with sand and water to put in a
mold
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mould
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to take
a
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the
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shape of a brick, another way of making
bricks
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is by cutting the
clay
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into the shape of a cuboid with the help of a wire cutter. The
clay
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moulds are
then
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put into a drying oven for 24-48 hours to let the
clay
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dry and
is
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are
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then
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put under severe temperatures ranging from 200 to 1300
degree
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degrees
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celsius
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Celsius
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to harden the
clay
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. Following it is the cooling process of the
bricks
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which
take
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takes
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anywhere from 48 to 72 hours. Since
bricks
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are symmetrical, they are easy to package and deliver.
To conclude
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, A brick is a mixture of sand and
clay
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which is put under severe conditions to shape and harden
them
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it
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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