The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates the protocol used to manufacture
bricks
for the building industry for construction work.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
Terrain
made up of Correct article usage
a Terrain
clay
is dug by Use synonyms
digger
and is Correct article usage
a digger
then
transported to a roller and a metal grid to filter any impurities like rocks and minerals that may be present in the Linking Words
clay
. The segregated Use synonyms
clay
is Use synonyms
then
mixed with sand and water to put in a Linking Words
mold
to take Change the spelling
mould
a
shape of a brick, another way of making Correct article usage
the
bricks
is by cutting the Use synonyms
clay
into the shape of a cuboid with the help of a wire cutter. The Use synonyms
clay
moulds are Use synonyms
then
put into a drying oven for 24-48 hours to let the Linking Words
clay
dry and Use synonyms
is
Change the verb form
are
then
put under severe temperatures ranging from 200 to 1300 Linking Words
degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celsius
to harden the Capitalize word
Celsius
clay
. Following it is the cooling process of the Use synonyms
bricks
which Use synonyms
take
anywhere from 48 to 72 hours. Since Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
bricks
are symmetrical, they are easy to package and deliver.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, A brick is a mixture of sand and Linking Words
clay
which is put under severe conditions to shape and harden Use synonyms
them
.Correct pronoun usage
it
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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