The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates the protocol used to manufacture
bricks
for the building industry for construction work.
Firstly
, Terrain
made up of Correct article usage
a Terrain
clay
is dug by digger
and is Correct article usage
a digger
then
transported to a roller and a metal grid to filter any impurities like rocks and minerals that may be present in the clay
. The segregated clay
is then
mixed with sand and water to put in a mold
to take Change the spelling
mould
a
shape of a brick, another way of making Correct article usage
the
bricks
is by cutting the clay
into the shape of a cuboid with the help of a wire cutter. The clay
moulds are then
put into a drying oven for 24-48 hours to let the clay
dry and is
Change the verb form
are
then
put under severe temperatures ranging from 200 to 1300 degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celsius
to harden the Capitalize word
Celsius
clay
. Following it is the cooling process of the bricks
which take
anywhere from 48 to 72 hours. Since Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
bricks
are symmetrical, they are easy to package and deliver.
To conclude
, A brick is a mixture of sand and clay
which is put under severe conditions to shape and harden them
.Correct pronoun usage
it
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