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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates data on the total number of waste production in three different organizations from 2000 to 2015. The unit given is tones.
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, companies A and
B
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 both had
a
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significantly
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 plunges in waste production, especially
B
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 over the recorded period,
whereas
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 firm C had an upward trend and had the highest number in 2015. Looking at establishments A and
B
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, company A started at 12
tonnes
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 in the initial year, which was the highest number compared to
other
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the other
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 three. Business
B
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 fell a second close stood at 8
tonnes
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 before reaching a peak
point
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 at 10
tonnes
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 in 2005.
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, in the following year, it experienced a drop and reached at
the
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lowest
point
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at
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of
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 3
tonnes
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 in 2015.
Similarly
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, company A had a downward trend, at which
point
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 dropped to 9
tonnes
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 over
period
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 of 15 years. Regarding firm C, it had the least waste production in 2000
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then
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and then
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double
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doubled
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 the figures after five years, accounting for 6
tonnes
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. By 2015, it
hitting
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hit
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 at
the
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highest
point
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 at 10
tonnes
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, tonnes, point with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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