The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates data on the total number of waste production in three different organizations from 2000 to 2015. The unit given is tones.
Overall
, companies A and B
both had a
Correct article usage
apply
significantly
plunges in waste production, especially Change the word
significant
B
over the recorded period, whereas
firm C had an upward trend and had the highest number in 2015.
Looking at establishments A and B
, company A started at 12 tonnes
in the initial year, which was the highest number compared to other
three. Business Correct article usage
the other
B
fell a second close stood at 8 tonnes
before reaching a peak point
at 10 tonnes
in 2005. However
, in the following year, it experienced a drop and reached at the
lowest Correct article usage
apply
point
at
3 Change preposition
of
tonnes
in 2015. Similarly
, company A had a downward trend, at which point
dropped to 9 tonnes
over period
of 15 years.
Regarding firm C, it had the least waste production in 2000 Add an article
a period
then
Correct word choice
and then
double
the figures after five years, accounting for 6 Wrong verb form
doubled
tonnes
. By 2015, it hitting
at Change the form of the verb
hit
the
highest Correct article usage
apply
point
at 10 tonnes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, tonnes, point with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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