you are living in a university residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restauranr which is open until midnight. write a letter to the governor of the university. complain about the situation say why this is a problem. propose ways to reduce teh noise.
Dear Sir/Madam,
It is with great regret that I am writing my studies.
this
letter to inform you about the noise level from the newly opened restaurant on the university campus. With a heavy heart, I must say that I am disappointed with this
scenario and your actions.
Let me profound
the reasons for my dismay. I have an exam the next month and for Verb problem
explain
that
I always study till midnight but Add a comma
that,
due to
the high volume, it is becoming difficult for me to concentrateChange preposition
on
Additionally
, It also
disturbs my sleeping pattern which Causes the headache. What was more disheartening was that when I got back to the campus restaurant to request to reduce the volume, the staff members behaved very rudely.
As a coverup for this
depressing and unexpected situation, I would like you to reduce closing hours till evening despite midnight. Not only this
, I anticipate you can also
take strict action regarding staff members, who behave badly .
Looking forward to a quick response from your end.
Yours Sincerely,
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coherence cohesion
To improve the logical structure, consider organizing the letter by separating the introduction, main complaint, and suggestions for resolution more clearly into distinct paragraphs.
task achievement
For a more formal tone, avoid using contractions like 'let me' and replace them with more formal phrases such as 'I would like to provide'.
coherence cohesion
Greetings and closing statements are well-crafted and appropriate for a formal letter.
task achievement
The letter clearly states the problem, its impact, and proposes a solution.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite