You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below give information about the way in which water used in different countries in 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
The pie chart shows the percentage of world
water
usage in three sectors, which are agriculture
, domestic and industry. Meanwhile, the graph chart indicates the water
portion used in those sectors in four countries.
Overall
, we can see that the worldwide water
was serving a
cultivation the most in Remove the article
apply
year
2000. Change the article
the year
In addition
, at
the same Change preposition
in
that
year, in New Zealand, the weighing of Correct determiner usage
apply
water
usage had a different trend that the water
for domestic was dominant.
With reference to the pie chart, the domestic was using the least of international water
resources with 8%. Whereas
, most of the world's water
used
for crop growing with 70% and the rest 22% was for Add a missing verb
is used
the
industry.
By looking at the graph bar, we can see that Canada uses the most Correct article usage
apply
water
for industrial 80% and the least water
for agriculture
at 8%. Meanwhile, it was quite opposite to India, it is at 92%, 5% and 3% respectively for agriculture
, domestic and industry. In addition
, we can be aware of the tremendous of water
for agriculture
used in China.Submitted by nelson311974 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, agriculture with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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