The chart below gives information about global population percentage and distribution of wealth by region
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date
shows a brief description of Correct your spelling
data
global
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the global
population
percentage and distribution of wealth
by region. Overall
, it can be seen that China
has the most population
share
while
North America
contributed the most for
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to
wealth
share
.
China
contributed most of the population
share
. Among the eight regions, China
’s population
share
is about more than 20%, followed by other Asia-Pacific
countries, India, Europe and Africa with more than 10% of population
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the population
share
. On the other hand
, regions with less than 10% of population
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the population
share
includes
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include
America
and Caribbean
, North Correct article usage
the Caribbean
America
and Rich Asia-Pacific
respectively.
However
, in terms of wealth
share
, North America
presented the highest with nearly 35%. It is then
followed by Europe with 30%, Rich
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and Rich
Asia-Pacific
with almost 25% respectively. The rest have almost 5% of the wealth
share
namely Latin America
and Caribbean, other Asia-Pacific
, China
, Africa and India.
In conclusion, China
has the most population
share
but has the lowest wealth
share
. On the other hand
, North America
contributed the highest wealth
share
but one of the lowest population
share
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