The graph below gives information on wages of Canada over a ten-year period.

The line chart illustrates the growth rate in wages in Canada from 1993 to 2003.

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it is clear that

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the trend was completely fluctuation over a given period. As can be seen, the start point was almost 2% and followed by a small rise to achieve nearly 4% in 1995.

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it decreased by a swing, so the percentage of incomes increased sharply and arrived at the highest point in the period and only touched the number of approximately 6 in 1999. After 2000, Canada witnessed a fair decline and reached the percentage of the starting point, the figure of 2. Even one year before they experienced the lowest percentage of wages, at about 1%. The whole trend made a pattern like head and shoulders. The people of Canada had the same wages in 1993 and 2003. In total, the graph showed a rise and a declining trend in the first and the middle of the chart.

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The graph below gives information on wages of Canada over a ten-year period.

Nowadays, people all over the world are watching foreign films much more than locally produced films. Why? Should government give more financial support to the local film industry? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

3.The internet is a good source of information and opened up opportunities for people all over the world. Is all information reliable online? What could be done to control information online.