You are going to organise a family party next week at your home. Do you want to invite a friend to this party. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to attend the party. In your letter, • explain why you are organising the party • describe what you are planning to do • say why you want your friend to come to the party

Dear my friend! How are you? I have one request for you. I hope you will help me

for

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with

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my party. You know my some close relatives live in Tashkent . On Tuesday, they will go back to Kashkadarya, and our family will

make

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have

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a big party for them. At

this

party, my all close relatives and best friends will be my guests. We will make our

day

. On

this

day

, our family will cook traditional foods and a lot of cakes because we have a lot of guests. I invite you 1

day

before because I need your help. When you come we will cook together.

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we will spend our time memorable with fun. After cooking, we will decorate my home and wait for all

guests

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the guests

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. I'm waiting for your answer letter. I hope you will be my helper on

this

day

. If you want I will go

your

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home and we will go back together. When you take my letter,please reply to me. Go'zal.

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coherence

Try to organize your letter into paragraphs that each focus on a single main idea. For instance, one paragraph can be dedicated to explaining why you are having the party, another for what you plan to do at the party, and a final one for why you want your friend to attend.

task achievement

Pay attention to grammar and clarity. The sentence "I invite you 1 day before because I need your help" can be clearer by stating "I am inviting you a day before the party because I need your help."

task achievement

Your tone is very suitable for an informal invitation. It is friendly, warm, and close, which matches the purpose of inviting a friend to a family party.

task achievement

You have included all the necessary details, such as the reason for the party, what you plan to do, and why you want your friend to come. This shows a complete response to the task.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

167 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

5.5

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

6.5

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

6.5

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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