The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
number
of
books
read by
men
and
women
during the years 201-2014 at the Burnaby Public Library. It is evident that in the
year
2010
women
read more
books
than
men
while
women
read 5000
books
men
only read 3000. Both
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genders showed an inclination towards the
number
of
books
read where
men
read 4000
books
and
women
read twice the amount of
books
men
read in the
year
2011.
In
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the beginning of 2012, the
number
of
books
read by
men
showed
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took a sharp turn and by 2013 both
the
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genders had read the same amount of
books
. The graph showed a drastic change when the
number
of
books
read by
women
suddenly started to decline
in contrast
to the
number
of
books
read by
men
which showed a steady growth. By the beginning of the
year
2014,
Men
read 14000
books
whereas
women
only read 7000.
To conclude
,
in
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at
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the beginning of 2011,
women
read more
books
than
men
but showed a steady decline in the
number
of
books
read in the
year
2013 which led to the
number
of
books
read by
men
to be double the amount of
books
read by
women
at the Burnaby Public library.
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