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The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
number
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 of
books
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 read by
men
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 and
women
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 during the years 201-2014 at the Burnaby Public Library. It is evident that in the
year
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 2010
women
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 read more
books
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 than
men
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while
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women
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 read 5000
books
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men
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 only read 3000. Both
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genders showed an inclination towards the
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 of
books
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 read where
men
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 read 4000
books
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 and
women
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 read twice the amount of
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men
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 read in the
year
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 2011.
In
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 the beginning of 2012, the
number
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 of
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 read by
men
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showed
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took a sharp turn and by 2013 both
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genders had read the same amount of
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. The graph showed a drastic change when the
number
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 of
books
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 read by
women
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 suddenly started to decline
in contrast
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 to the
number
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 of
books
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 read by
men
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 which showed a steady growth. By the beginning of the
year
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 2014,
Men
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 read 14000
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whereas
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women
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 only read 7000.
To conclude
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,
in
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 the beginning of 2011,
women
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 read more
books
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 than
men
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 but showed a steady decline in the
number
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 of
books
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 read in the
year
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 2013 which led to the
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 of
books
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 read by
men
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 to be double the amount of
books
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 read by
women
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 at the Burnaby Public library.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, books, men, women, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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